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PostSubject: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 19, 2009 4:49 am

It's so nice to read about a side of Jodoc that I've only vaguely (if even that) seen in game, and refreshing to get a glimpse of his history. Very well written with a nice surprise. A.K.A: OMGS i never knew his wife wasn't cimmerian!

One question... *coughs* is it finished? Very Happy I want more!
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 19, 2009 5:13 am

I quote Bjornia!! Although I did know his wife wasn't Cimmerian, I wasn't expecting her to be Stygian at all!

Very well written, loved it, and I want to know more too!
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 19, 2009 11:52 am

more !
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 19, 2009 12:47 pm

I concur! MOAR!


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PostSubject: Re: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 19, 2009 2:05 pm

Thanks for the praise and no, it's not done yet Wink Jo's an old bear and there's alot more of his life to tell. Too much to tell in one sitting!

Part three is being constructed in my brain as we speak and I should actually start typing it today so hopefully it will be up later. Unless I get writer's block.....which is possible Smile The old bear is a difficult one to write for as I've never had any idea of his backstory until he actually speaks about it ingame, so actually fitting all the clues together is a hard job. Also weird to write about him as a young and happy (well happier than the grumpy old bear anyway) man.

I never knew his wife was stygian either until I started writing it, but it just fell into place and explains alot about his attitude!
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 19, 2009 6:57 pm

Right that's part 3 and 4 up of the tale!

That might be the last I do for a time as that kinda rounds off that period of his life!

Hope you enjoy folks Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 19, 2009 7:04 pm

*wipes tears*

So sad. But so well written!

And so wolverine-ish of Jo... well done!
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding 'The Ebony Bride'   Regarding 'The Ebony Bride' I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 22, 2009 11:30 am

Wow Teco.. just read it all in one go and wow. Smile *wants to hug the old bear*

Very well written.
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