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Leoric
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Location : Gothenburg, Sweden
 |  Subject: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom  Thu Oct 22, 2009 11:30 am | |
| Amazing writing Bjornia.  You can feel that winter world they live in, and then the constrast is great as you feel the warmth between those two characters! More please!  | |
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Kyanth
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Join date : 2009-06-16
Age : 45
Location : Rome, Italy
| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:32 pm | |
| Oh yes!
I wish I could write this well. The descriptions are lively and I can't wait to see more of what will happen. | |
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Dragevio
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| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Thu Oct 22, 2009 11:10 pm | |
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Kyanth
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Location : Rome, Italy
| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:19 am | |
| Gah... even better than the first one.
Lend me some of your writing talent, please? | |
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Leoric
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| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:26 am | |
| Love the descriptions of little Aibhilin.  | |
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Tecocoitzin
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| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:43 pm | |
| Amazing writing as ever B I adore your descriptions. | |
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Leoric
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| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Mon Oct 26, 2009 5:27 pm | |
| Speechless. The descriptions, the mood, the way you assume the storyteller's role in text. There are so many little details in there that are just so awesomely written... wow Bjornia! | |
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Dragevio
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| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:11 am | |
| as only a shaman can tell it....
and it helps that a good song falls in when the battle part started! | |
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Leoric
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Join date : 2009-04-17
Age : 50
Location : Gothenburg, Sweden
| | Subject: Re: Regarding Memoir's of a winter's bloom Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:27 pm | |
| *just laughs* Your writing style is so incredibly descriptive and sets such an image in the mind's eye! I can't shake the image of wrinkly old men in a smokey tent passing a pipe around and muttering and nodding! And flailing arms and legs! Just.. wow. Again. | |
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