Tecocoitzin
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 |  Subject: Regarding 'hiaku over ordo templari'  Sun Nov 01, 2009 5:29 pm | |
| Simple and beautiful. A very simple poem form and you work it well. I know as well that it's something too to write, not only in a set form like that, but one not in your native langauge. My hat (helm) is off to you sir! I see you've tagged it anyone so I might reply given time with my own  | |
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Jadorm
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| | Subject: Re: Regarding 'hiaku over ordo templari' Sun Nov 01, 2009 7:45 pm | |
| Thanks, it was a try that i wish to have comments about, and it should be fine if we can get more in.  | |
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Leoric
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| | Subject: Re: Regarding 'hiaku over ordo templari' Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:24 pm | |
| That was heart warming, Jadorm! *proud tear* More poetry! I wish i was any good at it. | |
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