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PostSubject: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 21, 2009 1:42 pm

I just read this, and cried like a baby. Neutral

That was very well and emotionally written, Justinius. Whoever that character is, you really gave her some serious depth, didn't you? Well done!

*wipes tear*
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 21, 2009 2:27 pm

Ye gods...Not a fancy writer he says...had me teared up.
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 21, 2009 3:01 pm

Loved it.
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 21, 2009 4:11 pm

Very nicely done
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 21, 2009 4:44 pm

I confess... it did bring, just a little, tear to my eye. Okay okay, maybe several!
Beautifully written. I could really feel the emotion and her struggles to finally let go. Great to see that some RP inspired you to share your writing here!
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 21, 2009 6:15 pm

Thank you all!

Trust me, having to portray the pain of a mother over a lost son and husband was perhaps the hardest RP/piece of writing I ever had to write. So it was written from the heart, and I thank you all, really.


Leoric, she's my lvl 20 Cimmerian Guardian, unguilded, but she's become such a strong character to me that I'm loving RPing her. She is perhaps the most complex, deep character I've ever had, and perhaps even more complex than my Demonologist main!


THank you all again for the good comments. *hugs*
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 21, 2009 8:32 pm

First time the old bear has inspired anyone to do anything other than throw old boots at him....

Your writing puts the rp that come before in the shade Justi Wink Brilliant!
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 25, 2009 6:11 am

Inspired by the in-game RP again. Another day of me crying like a baby *sighs*

For the last time, I hope!
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PostSubject: Re: Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth"   Regarding "A Mother's Rebirth" I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 25, 2009 1:35 pm

*growling sniffles come from the old bear*

You wrote it up well and done justice to what was a very emotional and inspiring bit of rp. I'm glad the old bear could show (yet another) of his sides and be the shaman for Nola and help her rest her spirits in the mountains.

*bows to the rp greatness that is Nola and the writing greatness of Justi*
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